Comments : Natural Disaster

  • 9 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love how you described the urgency, the onset of chaos, and then softened it in the end with the imagery of cocoa and feeling protected against the storm. There's a sense of the unknown, of danger, of a force to be reckoned with when concerning first love and you've created a very lively, vivid piece in its emotions and movement.

    • 7 months ago

      by Nobody

      Thank you so much I really appreciate the insight. It always a treat to hear what others feel or notice with your work.