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by Ben Pickard
A desperate sort of write helped by the excellent rhyme throughout.
This rhyme is so flawless. It didn't feel forced in any aspect in my opinion. The subject matter is compelling as well. Have definitely felt like this before, and it is told so vividly, taking me back to those moments in my life. Great job.
Well done with this. Your rhyming is spot on. You really nailed sinking into depression and working your way back. Stay strong-