This is beautiful, MA. A really touching piece of prosetry with delicate imagery here and there. ‘Impetuous kisses’, ‘pettiness like a flower’, are standout images. I would have liked a continuation of a metaphor here, or some image that holds the piece together, but it reads just as well as a narrative. I feel as if it was written quickly, and as a result, the emotion is raw, and there are notes of some bitterness, as well as sweetness too. Lovely as always :)

Lovely imagery MA, along with a very sad tale. So beautifully written :)x M

I am very sorry you are suffering the loss of this person's company, MA. However, I am not sorry for the way you have portrayed it here. I had a lump in my throat at the end of this one.

Take care

Sensuous and exquisite

A sad tale with superb imagery. Congratulations on your win. Best wishes Milly x

So beautiful. Resonates with anyone who has loved and lost. Writing from the wound, always makes the personal universal. Well done and sorry for your what happened too.