Comments : What grows in my garden.

  • 4 months ago

    by Daniel

    This is beautiful, MA. A really touching piece of prosetry with delicate imagery here and there. ‘Impetuous kisses’, ‘pettiness like a flower’, are standout images. I would have liked a continuation of a metaphor here, or some image that holds the piece together, but it reads just as well as a narrative. I feel as if it was written quickly, and as a result, the emotion is raw, and there are notes of some bitterness, as well as sweetness too. Lovely as always :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Lovely imagery MA, along with a very sad tale. So beautifully written :)x M

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I am very sorry you are suffering the loss of this person's company, MA. However, I am not sorry for the way you have portrayed it here. I had a lump in my throat at the end of this one.

    Take care

  • 4 months ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Sensuous and exquisite

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A sad tale with superb imagery. Congratulations on your win. Best wishes Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Tanya Southey

    So beautiful. Resonates with anyone who has loved and lost. Writing from the wound, always makes the personal universal. Well done and sorry for your what happened too.