Comments : First Became Aware of Itself

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    Your style of writing is original, and to me every poem of yours has something deep.
    This for me feels like it’s been inspired by the devastating news we hear these days.
    I like this piece, and if I could I would have nominated it!!

    • 5 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Stare, It was nominated last week.
      I am glad that you unlike the most earth through the hard substances to find some real meaning.