Comments : The River

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Craig, another excellent piece from you which isn't just pretty rhyming as rhyming sometimes is, but thoughtful and well told too.
    Excellent!

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks dude

      I kinda feel this one rambles a bit and it kinda ran away from me but I popped it up anyway

      It was inspired by a walk in the woods with my daughter and my dogs. We could follow the river which would be easy or go through the woods. Eventually, after about an hours treck up up and down, slip and slide the woods come back to the river. At this point we had a choice. Cross the bridge or turn left and follow a little stream.

      We didn't follow the stream for long, but so glad we did, despite it being a little tricky underfoot.

      I'll try to upload a pic to my profile of what we found

      regards as always

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Truly enjoyed reading especially the part with those bridges. Nominated