In my humble opinion, the first stanza is very poetical, the second almost uphold the greatness of the first one. The third turn to self-help edifying. Being a good poet and a great person simultaneously, sometimes give writers confusions like this, because both of them are directly connected to our tender feelings.

Great work after all.

I really liked this a lot. It's open, honest and an emphinany really. Well done-

Glad to see this nominated...