Comments : I'm Sorry

  • 4 months ago

    by Imperfection

    You say your sorry and I know you are I know you mean it but not all the sorrys was needed and the ones that are I do wonder. I wonder why you did them and if that means cause you know you have will you continue? Or will you let me in. Will you stop pushing me away or will you now pull me in I know our love is hard but I also know it’s real it’s always been and never will die. If only we cud be maybe sorrys wouldn’t need to be anymore. But I love you and you can hurt me a thousand times you can push away all you like you can do all these things and more but I swear I’d still be standing there telling you how much I care with my loving eyes staring at you all I’ll say is I love you and you’ll know it’s true xx

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Reading the content of this poem was surprising and thought provoking at so many levels. My initial comments and feedback were based on my own personal interpretation of what I had read but with hindsight I feel that I read much more into it than what was actually going on and in doing so went way off from the target of what the writer was meaning.

    There are so many different ways to interpret what is written and I would like to agree with Lilly that sometimes saying sorry and putting your inner feelings out there takes great bravery and strength of character. The writer has laid out their perceived short comings and admitted mistakes and in doing so reveals their deep and eternally strong feeling for the person that they love. Love can be complex and sometimes can be frustrating and beset with difficulties but it does not diminish the ardour of that love.

    This poem has certainly been thought provoking. It is the hardest thing in the world to have found the love of your life and yet be unable to be with them. I am a huge romantic and I believe with every ounce of my body that true love will always find a way no matter how long it takes. I will pray for you both to find a way to be together and am sending you much love Milly x

    • 4 months ago

      by Imperfection

      Thank you Milly for all ur ideas and comments x