This moved me thoroughly, Daniel. If you haven't seen the film, I suggest you watch 'Before Sunrise', not least because it's marvellous but also because it will resonate with anyone who can write a piece so full of yearning and emotion.
we were last night.
should this be 'we were on last night'? Not sure.
Your words, including the title, are simple yet thoughtful.. Those simple things that are part of daily life, are the most that cause the longing...
I am not a master in writing, but the part that Ben pointed out, I get where you’re going with it. I do that sometimes as well, I know it may be or sound wrong but it just carries a different feel, at least for me :)