Comments : The Story of my Heart

  • 2 years ago

    by Star

    This is a sad piece, but I like how it’s written. There maybe a lot of punctuation, but in this case I like that it makes me feel hesitation, maybe of letting go!!

  • 2 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I do like the short trailing stanzas you've used.

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    The punctuation certainly adds to the feel and read of the piece. Milly x