Comments : Gilded Rose

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Probably the most perfectly rhymed piece I've read from you, Milly, and the content is wise indeed.
    Nominated.

    All the best as ever.

    • 5 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      I'm working really hard to improve my poetry so thank you Ben xx

  • 5 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Milly, this, as Ben says, is perfectly rhymed and with a message that strikes true. All that glisters is not gold.
    Well done x

    • 5 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you - rhyming words is easy but rhyming perfectly does take a lot of effort for me at least. Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly,
    I have to agree with Ben, this is a wonderful piece of rhyming from you, and a lovely message.
    Glad to see this nominated lady!
    Much love, M :)x

    • 5 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Michael. I'm trying really hard to improve my poetry so its lovely to get such great feedback. Much love Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    What a lovely write Milly will add to my favorite. Sending my love

    • 5 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Dagmar much love back to you too xx

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, such a beautiful write! I adore your visuals! Well done!

    • 5 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Brenda :) glad you liked it Much love Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Dayo

    What a beauty! The rhyme scheme got me captivated and I must confess, like Ben and others have agreed it's nice. Good piece!

  • 5 months ago

    by Daniel

    Excellent rhyming on display; flows effortlessly with some really lush imagery.

  • 5 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Nothing Gilded about this write Milly
    I wish I had your poetic tounge and mind
    Lovely x