Comments : Gone (rhymed etheree)

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I do like this form, especially when rhyme is used.
    A broke heart is not just upsetting, it makes one angry as this poem shows.
    The relationship sank
    I'm done with feeling rank
    you'll know who to thank
    now I'm independent

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm not familiar with this form but it is captivating. Its very well written and loved the rhyming. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I'm glad this formed piece won. Well done..

  • 2 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    I love this form and your poem. A deserving win! :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Sive Klaas

    a doleful poem with beautiful structure.

    well done Larry.