Comments : Simplest Form of Happiness

  • 6 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing.

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      Thank for reading^_^

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think it seems 'quite right'. In fact, darn it to hell, it feels so right I may just nominate it! It really is the simple things in life that bring the most pleasure, isn't it?
    By the way, as a side note and it's completely up to you of course, but I can't help wanting to read 'simplest things' at the end there. Or 'simplest OF things'.

    Anyway, take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      And it is always the simple things that we keep ignoring!!!
      Thank you soooo much, I think you like surprising people:)
      I actually added “things” word and took it out couple if time before posting this.
      Thanks again Ben!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    STAR,
    A nice and gentle piece of writing, expressing in your words how much the simple things in life can be cherished.
    Nicely penned :) M

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you Michael !!!

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I do like shape poetry. Your words are right, it's just the spacing of the lines that needs tweaking. Look at my Montgolfier poem. X

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      You are right, I will check it out now. Thank you!!

  • 6 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    The simplest things in life do bring such joy! And I can really feel that in this poem which is why I love it :)

    Beautifully written and expressed :D

    • 6 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you Lee ^_^