I like the short lines of this piece it adds to the momentum and the feel of panic. I think anyone who smokes who has ever woken up in the night after a nightmare could definitely relate. Milly x

Haven't we all had one of these " nightmars? " ( which are not nice at all !! ) You have expressed so clearly how they make us feel after havung one.

FSNTASTIC poem.. That reminded me clearly what its like to have a nightmare!

Very well written AND expressed! :D

Well done!