An astronomical piece indeed :) Enjoyed very much the planetary metaphors and the title just sets it off nicely. Milly x

Hi, Scott. This is a wonderful galactic poem. Its literary crammed of universe references, like a milky way full of stars.

Nice work.
BTW just check over for typos.

A beautiful poem Scott... So well crafted and penned.. Just " out of this world and untouchable!"
Loved it.

Yed

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