Comments : Trapped

  • 4 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There was such a push-and-pull in this piece that perfectly embodied the feeling and essence of being "trapped". How we still survive and feel like we are moving forward, but can't see or track the progress. The kind of illusions our minds convince us are real - that the light will never be found, that we won't be able to hold on any longer.

    But we must still try. Even if the endless black surrounds us. We must keep hoping for more.
    Thank you for sharing a very frightening and emotional reality of being trapped.

    • 4 months ago

      by Hamda

      Thank you

  • 4 months ago

    by Star

    What a strong start you have here!! Congratulations on your win Hamda, and welcome to P&Q ^_^

    • 4 months ago

      by Hamda

      Thank you, so much and congratulation too on your win, Winter’s Spirit. It was an amazing and strong poem.

  • 4 months ago

    by sammiej

    Does hello love this poem trapped but I am also very confused as to how you get to enter in competition and and more portly how do you win own your poem obviouslyDeserves this win that goes without saying but this site is also quite confusing as sometimes it is quite active other times there is no one posting or even liking or seems to be reading g anybody else’s poems as you have three likes on this poem and Pphow can this be I’ve been a member of this site for quite a number of years now and to be honest with you I still don’t know how it works please can somebody help me