Comments : Grass in the Wind

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Wow ! and the sun, would always paint us the same color! No matter how tall we grow,

    fluttering to the horizon.

    What a beautiful piece. Beautiful poem. The whole scene was spectacular. The wind pushing us as though we are leafs, dancing all along one another..We are all in on the same page. I could write your whole poem to explain what I loved most about it. The imagery is sharp.