Comments : Fields of Dreams (English Sonnet)

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Powerful metaphors, smooth flow and great underlying message. Beautiful

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A powerful piece highly uncomfortable for all arachnophobes. :) Sonnets are not easy to write but you have nailed it with this unusual subject matter. Very visual imagery of the destructive eating process. Superb. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Powerful piece, great win!

  • 2 months ago

    by Daniel

    As I just mentioned to Ben, you too have an innate ability with formed poetry. I’m not the biggest sonnet fan, as i’ve probably mentioned 40 times but this has a timeless, classic feel. I liked the shift between dark imagery and the uplifting end.

    • 2 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, that means a lot to me.

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great sonnet, Michael. Congratulations.

    • 2 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Ben. Its nice to share the front page with you.

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh, a dark sonnet! I love the metaphor of the creepy crawlies of a dark and tortured mind being eradicated by sun-shiny thoughts of fields of green. Beautifully written as always :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 day ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Fascinating Mr D x