Powerful metaphors, smooth flow and great underlying message. Beautiful

A powerful piece highly uncomfortable for all arachnophobes. :) Sonnets are not easy to write but you have nailed it with this unusual subject matter. Very visual imagery of the destructive eating process. Superb. Milly x

Powerful piece, great win!

As I just mentioned to Ben, you too have an innate ability with formed poetry. I’m not the biggest sonnet fan, as i’ve probably mentioned 40 times but this has a timeless, classic feel. I liked the shift between dark imagery and the uplifting end.

Great sonnet, Michael. Congratulations.

Ooh, a dark sonnet! I love the metaphor of the creepy crawlies of a dark and tortured mind being eradicated by sun-shiny thoughts of fields of green. Beautifully written as always :-) x
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Fascinating Mr D x