Comments : You never forgot who they were.

  • 7 months ago

    by ddavidd

    What are the empty cloths: Unwornones??

    "That you were still you underneath the pain"

    You are a real deal. Reading the first sentence I realized that in you. I hope you hang around or better, become more active.

  • 7 months ago

    by Daniel

    ‘It never stopped you from looking for ghosts
    In empty clothes.’

    This line carries your poem effectively. This is short but evocative.

    Well done. I hope to see more work from you!

  • 7 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is me right now...