Comments : Lovers

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each verse has been specially crafted with thoughts, feelings as well as the senses when you write about your love. I liked the 5th verse and the use of words to create lingering images..well done..and Congrats on the win!

    • 4 years ago

      by Tanya Southey

      Thank you Meena, appreciate the feedback and that it resonated for you.

  • 4 years ago

    by William Mae

    A deserving win and clever way of framing the poem around the verse, “you were my first love”