Comments : If Only I Could Write a Sonnet [ sonnet ]

  • 6 years ago

    by Alex Yew

    Best of luck to you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Or in a way, my thoughts could find a rhythm,
    some sort of beat resembling the morse code
    from which I could create an algorithm
    that only I could easily decode.

    ^^

    I have to say, Lucero, there is some very clever rhyming here. 'rhythm'/'algorithm' - brilliant! Jealous of that one.

    Take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Cleverly put! Great word play...

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Brenda! And thank you Ben, hehe take care too

  • 6 years ago

    by Walter

    A great sonnet! I enjoyed reading this one.

  • 6 years ago

    by Star

    And you wrote one? lol
    Luce this poem is something only you can write. I love the mood it left me with a huge smile.
    I should attempt “If Only I Could Write a Sonnet”. Yours went uphill mine would drag it down :D

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol Thank you S.T.A.R. But but go for it! With yours and mine we can create a roller coaster... mine going up hill then yours down the hill then I’ll write another going straight then you write another going up hill, I’ll write another going down hill and who knows, we might have lots of fun..

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Love the title, I think it's a real achievement just to complete a sonnet and you wrote it well

  • 6 years ago

    by D.

    This is extremely well done - so much you’ve made the title completely ironic :D

    Very good!