Ingenious.. I really liked this unusual and compelling tale. Welcome to the site - I think you will find most of us a friendly bunch of all ages and backgrounds passionate about poetry. It's a lovely little community quite different from other sites and I hope you will enjoy being part of it. I saw from your profile you are writer new to poetry writing. I for one am definitely enjoying your work. It is fresh and imaginative and a delight to read. Looking forward to reading your next piece. Best wishes Milly x