Comments : Becoming my enemy

  • 1 week ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh ... this is brilliant! Such defiance and grit interlaced with a grave warning. It's dark but great and you've pitched the pace and rhyming so well. Well done Rey!
    Nominated:-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Rhyme and metre spot on and a dynamic rebellious theme to boot. Loved it Milly x