Comments : Unity

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    Caught a couple of typos

    'and breath April's' should be 'and breathe April's'
    ' multi-colored lanscape' should be ' multi-colored landscape'

    Apart from that, this is beautiful. It's rich in imagery, and I swear if I close my eyes I could hear a busy street, insects converging to whisper a name. Beautifully written!

    • 4 years ago

      by Mementomorii

      Hi there, Hiraeth! Thank you for pointing out the typos. I wrote that in the middle of the night when I can't sleep and just posted it immediately! Glad you like the poem! :)