Comments : Return of Favors

  • 6 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    She is your muse, indeed. This was a lovely, genuine dedication to her and memory of meeting with her, and perhaps knowing she would be your everlasting love?

    The best lines in my opinion were:

    "but all I could think of was
    how nice she felt beside me
    and how she smelled like
    a hundred better days ahead."

    So genuine and heartwarming. I am happy you both have found each other and are deeply connected, I just adore when you write poems about, for or to her!