Comments : Barbecue

  • 2 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I think the idea of your feelings and the barbeque tied up well in this piece, although some lines appear forced to rhyme, but it still got its messagw across. I think this was a clever write.

  • 2 years ago

    by prasanna

    I like this poem, it's ripe with fascinating concepts: 'starving mind', 'cravings in slumber', 'chew so quiet, i would hear my heartbeat'. Well written piece that I'm sure a lot of us can relate to; the stewing of emotions and then swallowing the confessions that comes up, but it's healthy to let those confessions air out, every now and then :)