Comments : Breathe

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Almost at loss for words here, because this poem affected me that much! Your voice is so raw in this poem, and especially jolting when you hope for air that will not harm you. Nothing self-destructive, only refreshing air that can heal your mind and body. No more anguish. No more sharp edges.

    You said so much in so few lines, I don't know what else to say <3

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow, this is so intense. Nominated