by Ben Pickard
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I really do like this and the opening three lines are sublime, in my opinion. |
by Risqué
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Thanks Ben, will do. |
by Brenda
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No matter how hard you try, you cant make another person whole. People like that will drain you dry and leave you destroyed. Totally relatable piece, so many of us have been there. Stay strong, you are so much more than what this person made you feel like. |
by CRAFTY KEN
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Nice work Risque', great beginning; I have given up so much time. |