Comments : Repair

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Hmm so is this poem’s voice coming from God as a narrator? At least that’s what I pictured when I read the third stanza. Nonetheless I like the rhythm in the poem. The poem is like a cheer as if God is rooting for us humans to wake up and make amends. Thanks for sharing.

    • 4 years ago

      by Broken Nightingale

      more like mother nature speaking.... But yeap God sounds just fine :-)
      Thankyou for your kind words.