Comments : Whatever happens;

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    ohhhh this hits the heart. The poem says it all and places the reader into the thoughts, feelings and the moment of realizing what is happened. Beautiful and heartbreaking. powerful write

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A really moving piece. Nominated.

  • 4 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is my exact situation right now so I'm totally relating to this. Well said! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 4 years ago

    by D.

    I loved the simplicity of this. The last line should sound overly sweet and sentimental but it doesn’t. Well done :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The simplicity, yet the meaning and understanding of your two souls existing, focusing on that is a wonderful thing. That you cannot always foreshadow or predict what is up ahead, there is no manual on how to love. You just do. You just move forward, together.

  • 4 years ago

    by Koan

    Yup! Thats about it...
    Great read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    That's some pretty deep stuff and extremely relatable..