Comments : Whatever happens;

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    ohhhh this hits the heart. The poem says it all and places the reader into the thoughts, feelings and the moment of realizing what is happened. Beautiful and heartbreaking. powerful write

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A really moving piece. Nominated.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is my exact situation right now so I'm totally relating to this. Well said! :-) x

  • 1 year ago

    by Daniel

    I loved the simplicity of this. The last line should sound overly sweet and sentimental but it doesn’t. Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The simplicity, yet the meaning and understanding of your two souls existing, focusing on that is a wonderful thing. That you cannot always foreshadow or predict what is up ahead, there is no manual on how to love. You just do. You just move forward, together.

  • 1 year ago

    by Koan

    Yup! Thats about it...
    Great read.

  • 8 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    That's some pretty deep stuff and extremely relatable..