Comments : dancer

  • 7 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This poem has that spark - that little intrigue about this woman who is not aware of you, a dancer from France.... I love how your lines are simple, not too much detail, solidifying this mystery yet reminding the reader that she brings light to the town. We don't know much else about her, just that she has this presence about her. It's endearing. Especially since we have this beautiful name, a name I've never heard before, and how it seems you know that and her check out date and perhaps other things... but she comes and goes, and it's in these tiny moments that we can glimpse something beyond ourselves.

    Lovely!