Comments : Unbecoming Of The Poem

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This is my favourite of your recent poems. The start with its contrast of a fat moon and bland earth caught my attention straight away because the earth in reality is quite beautiful from space. It had to be a metaphor for how someone felt about themselves. The third stanza for me drew everything together neatly the conflict revealed and further laid out in the last two. An enjoyable read. Milly x