Comments : Pieces

  • 3 years ago

    by Kate

    I love this. Love the confessional style of the poem, makes it feel like an AA meeting but for a broken heart. Makes it feel more raw and real.

    I also like how each section becomes smaller in the amount of lines and how it reflects the breakdown of the person narrating and how their effort over time has drained them.

    Beautiful write. Favorited.

  • 3 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Hi best friend

    I really like this piece. I honestly think it’s one of your best. I’m always impressed with the different ways you can express yourself. Love you

  • 3 years ago

    by Koan

    I love the way you wrote this poem... "Hello, my name is.." Brilliant!