Comments : For Trish #4

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely, Alfred. It sounds to me like these are the only ways we should be in love. I really liked line three, by the way.

    Nominated.

    • 6 years ago

      by Koan

      Thank you Ben!
      The whole poem started from line 3... Its the perfect metaphor for what I'm trying to show to the reader.. I hope anyway.. lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    As cliché as this may sound, I truly felt every bit of love that poured from your words. Almost like it was written for me, though I am no Trish. Very refreshing, simple yet powerful. Beautiful!

    • 6 years ago

      by Koan

      Honestly my friend!
      I could not ask for a more amazing comment from anyone ever because this is how a reader should feel after reading a poem... Thank You!