Comments : Arcobaleno

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    And I learned something new today! The title, the Italian word for "rainbow".

    Lovely little piece. I would suggest a separation or line break between the second and third line... but I like the way this made me think of a fantasy character, granting wishes and helping people reach their dreams. "accommodate the dreams" was an interesting word choice, I think rainbows mean lots of things to different people. It can give someone hope, and be a sign to another.

    • 4 years ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you Poet On The Piano,
      Love your suggestions and gives me food for thought,
      Vince.

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    What a cool word! I loved this and the thoughts behind this.

    • 4 years ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you Brenda,lovely comment,
      Vince.