Comments : Unexpected Tears

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful Maher, I hope your friend finds her way back-

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Brenda, I hope so too. She lost her father so it won't be easy.

  • 3 months ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello Maher,
    There is such a weight to this excellent poem. The sense of loss is overwhelming so acute your observations and how you portray them verse on verse until the whole poem captures the reader with a feeling of anguish and the rawness of it. A superlative piece, truly.

    Kind regards, Tony.

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thank you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the emotion came through.

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A powerful piece that's full of deep dark vivid emotion. Death is very difficult to deal with and more so for some. Milly x

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Milly, it is certainly much harder for some.