Comments : The Dark Harmony Between Reality and Youth

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    I know I've read this before, but re-reading it again and damn.

    I genuinely have no words to say, the poem itself is vague makes one think about what was said, although there are slight clues given, it's something a lot of people can relate to, I think. This is genuinely perfectly written, you captured that feeling of getting exposed to something in your youth that you weren't prepared for.

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      I am shocked!! This isnt supposed to be perfect, but maybe thats why you said it is?

      I was trying to capture the situation without telling too much.
      It isnt something real bad that happened, but I believe the impact of that conversation on that girl was so negatively huge, it shouldn’t have ended abruptly. And I should have said more.