Comments : Abandoned

  • 4 years ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello Tasha,
    A delicate beauty meanders throughout this excellent poem of loss, disappointment and sorrow. Your way with words is to be admired and appreciated. Excellent! Very well done indeed.

    Kind regards, Tony.

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A raw poem, as those questions of our worth and wondering if we drove them away, those thoughts can bury us. I resonated with the detachment part, because how often do we isolate and build those walls up so we can't experience hurt and disappointment.

    Hope it helped to write this out. Stay strong!

  • 4 years ago

    by Tasha

    Thank you Tony and Poet on the Piano! It's been a while since I've written and it really did help to get the words out. I appreciate the kind words especially when it comes from great writers.