Comments : napowrimo: escape from you (day four)

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I really love your love poems. This strong bond and attachment that can be sensed in most of them, reflecting immense feelings and sincerity. That last line, is so sweet but not cheesy.

    the heart agitates
    at the three syllables
    of your name.

    ^just reflects how the poet here is in love with this person.

    And yest my friend, life is so full of irony.