by Ben Pickard
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If this is literal, it must be hard to swallow, as it were. There is little worse than feeling you are not loved quite as much as you should be. |
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The metaphor of you being the end pieces, wow, that hit hard. In my family, those end bread pieces are sometimes thrown away, and I have to remind my family members to save them from me, that they are still good, that it is a waste to discard of perfectly good bread. |
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Thank you so much. This definitely came from a place of great pain. I’m glad it resonated with you |
by Ink
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I like this poem a lot, very heartfelt, I like how much you convey with brevity. very relatable. regards Ink |