Comments : Faults

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    I really love the imagery in this but in the last stanza wow!

    "Tears thickened
    as they sweetened
    her bitter time."

    !!

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    A sad piece STAR, but such a nice end to your poem :) M

    • 4 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Michael and Mark :)