Comments : Desires

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I can't help but share that this reminds me of the children's book, "The Giving Tree".
    I think in the last stanza, the third line should be "And that vine loved me" and the last line "And put into peace", there were just a few spelling errors?

    The contrast of giving but never receiving in the first stanza, being drained of spirit and purpose, yet being given too much in the next stanza that you do not know what do... and finally, finding balance and being interdependent.

    Love this!

    • 4 years ago

      by Ziad Dib Jreige

      Hello.

      Oh, nice
      I'll check that hiving tree : )
      Of course of course. You are definitely right aboit that my friend. And that vine loved ... And put... thank you for pointing this up. Tha k you so much always, always appreciating your feedbacks and support. Glad you love it.