Comments : napowrimo: derivative (day 21)

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    I have no words, this is very smart!! I really like that you did the opposite of resigning the words you repeat and used all of them in this poem.
    Although they’re repeated they do have a character. :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    It is astonishing for me, to see how much we can relate to other people's feelings and how others do find themselves in some of our words too. there are pieces in me in this poem and I've seen myself writing many of these line, just not as powerful.

    i hate that you are
    a part of my poetry that will never subside,
    and i thank you for it. i

    ^^
    especially this, I relate badly to these lines, except from a different perspective. You're my favorite writer you know that.