Comments : Casting

  • 4 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    I am leaving the same comment for both poems, you and Mark's, what did the both of you just write? I hope the randomness of the weekly takes both poems to the front.

    You both have different styles yet each had this magical atmosphere and honestly magical wording. I'm a 3rd to be left inspired.

    • 4 months ago

      by Star

      I cant believe this inspired you guys!
      Thank you ^_^

  • 4 months ago

    by Shruti

    Oh that literal image is dark and painful ('crafting pathways for infections' and such) but I can't stop re-reading this, it's so good!
    I also keep forgetting that it's the voices that keep opening her wounds, and instead I keep imagining some kind of insects xD, but then I remember and the poem gets even better!

    • 4 months ago

      by Star

      I can think of many people who would get disgusted by the idea of insects.
      Thank you Shruti ^_^

  • 3 months ago

    by Skyfire

    I feel like this poem is about an idea I can't quite grasp, but it's vividly mesmerizing anyway. The first 2 verses remind me of inner turmoil, while the 3rd remains a mystery.

    • 3 months ago

      by Star

      It could be about anything, but what I had in mind while writing it is the dark thoughts that feed on the good ones. Thank you Skyfire :)