I am leaving the same comment for both poems, you and Mark's, what did the both of you just write? I hope the randomness of the weekly takes both poems to the front.

You both have different styles yet each had this magical atmosphere and honestly magical wording. I'm a 3rd to be left inspired.

I should have been the one nominating this. Rania keeps beating me to it!!
Actually your wording in this is interesting.
This is beautiful!

I cant put my thoughts on this in a proper comment right now, maybe I should do that some other time :)

The first line is so good, it alone left many beautiful and gentle images in my mind.
And the comparison of their heart to a beating conch shell, I love that so much.
And towards the end, even after knowing the danger and the end result, diving into it, impaling yourself to the hook willingly; I don't know if this is about love or anything else, but it's beautiful!