Comments : loop.

  • 1 week ago

    by Star

    WOW if this is inspired by the prompt the it has outdone it!!!

    Again the period in the title, after loop? It felt like the loop is already broken/closed.
    I love it!!

    • 1 week ago

      by hiraeth

      I wasn't even thinking about your prompt consciously when I was writing this, but it really does fit! Thank you for prompting this directly/indirectly :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Vanessa

    The title Loop caught my attention. I must say I wasn't disappointed either. The first two lines start this off strongly.

    where time slips backwards,
    and we’re destined to meet for
    the very first time again

    love this
    Clever piece well penned