I couldn't comment before, but I was reading. Now that I am mentally read here I am lol
I'm so happy to see you writing poems after reading mine, I know how thoroughly you get mine and perhaps know all behind them and to read this, was so moving for me. I felt I wrote it! I could repeat every line myself. There is so much passion in your word choice too. I was fond of the "i want" tone, it's rare in your work and gives it so such a genuine power.

you’ll find
me, deep in the meadows, perched upon
our favourite cliff,

^ wow...how did you even write these lines...

The irony, now I am inspired by the poem you wrote while you were inspired by another.