Comments : years

  • 8 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    ....and the years should have thought us about experience when mingled with emotions...deep.
    Good to see a new write from you and I hope you are well..take care

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is so full of wonderful language; it is really well written throughout. Expertly done, truly.

  • 5 months ago

    by Skyfire

    Particularly liked this line..."We watched eternity, never knowing if it would end." It made me think about how isn't eternity supposed to be endless? It seems that way when we love someone, that it will be forever, but I think there's always that small thought in the back of the mind that maybe... It won't be.