This is very interesting. I really like the ending line it wrapped a the poem really well!!
Welcome to P&Q :)

I really like this piece, and nominated it for the weekly contest, in which a panel of volunteer judges will go over the nominated poems and vote on their favourites. I hope this piece makes it!

Well written, and welcome to the site :)

Welcome to P&Q! I found this piece quite simple but really captivating. It builds up towards the final two lines, which tie together with the title very nicely!

Hope to see more writing from you. :)