Comments : Kuafu (The Hunter of the Sun)

  • 1 week ago

    by BOB GALLO

    We Persian like trees are sun worshiper as well. The language in this is very sublime Your poetry is at it best when you curl things to extend inclinations, desires and motions and see the snake affect of objects specially in vegetation and plants. The inclination are very important to you in your poetry. Pie is preferred over square, because you do not draw straight line and neither life, there are always inclinations and twirl instead of mathematical accuracy.
    I like also the contrast of the sun hunter and turning to the field draped by shadow, is kind of irony. Actually it is The Irony.
    Very strong write!!

    • 1 week ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you for your wonderfully constructive comment good sir. :)