I loved the final stanza, Star. I don't have much to say about this, other than it's solemnly beautiful. Glad to see it nominated, and I feel your poetry is developing a stronger and stronger voice each time I read something new from you. I would just comment that
'Though, with every letter
you are getting lost in context.'
This is a little awkwardly phrased & possibly a little superfluous. I think it's already implied in the stanza above that the persona is having difficulties retaining the person she once knew in the words of her poetry.
Thats actually right, I’m well aware that it’s already implied but my intention of saying was to actually make the verse longer add the letters. If that makes sense :)
Thank you so much Daniel, that means a lot !!!