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"Tonight, the shadow in my closet is humming songs from your past" is just genius. It has so many potential connotations. A great little poem with great visuals. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x |
by Star
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Thank you Milly ^_^ |
by D.
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I loved the final stanza, Star. I don't have much to say about this, other than it's solemnly beautiful. Glad to see it nominated, and I feel your poetry is developing a stronger and stronger voice each time I read something new from you. I would just comment that |
by Star
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Thats actually right, I’m well aware that it’s already implied but my intention of saying was to actually make the verse longer add the letters. If that makes sense :) |
by Liz
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So glad to see this on the front page! |
by Star
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Thank you Liz :) |
by Lost star
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I'm so glad you highlighted this one, just beautifully written, I really like the sentiment that flows through this, it really is first class. Saved for later consumption :) |
by Star
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It does capture a certain feeling for, thank you for leaving a comment :) |